awhyzip: (Default)
2005-12-06 12:26 am
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just one more haiku

Oh stupid poem!
Keep me up past my bedtime
I've almost got you


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awhyzip: (Default)
2005-12-05 11:50 pm

variations on a poem idea

The situation felt like a haiku. I try to work out the words here.

various attempts )


anticipation
both edges of the road clear
revealed for the plow



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